--- cf.schmorp.de/maps/scorn/shops/tradeshop.map	2006/08/14 21:39:00	1.1
+++ cf.schmorp.de/maps/scorn/shops/tradeshop.map	2006/08/14 22:00:57	1.2
@@ -1908,19 +1908,20 @@
 @match receive|receive money|receive the money
 @eval reseller::pay_player $who, $msg, $npc
 @match *
-Hello! What can i do for you?
-If you traded something here, you can view the sales if you want.
+Hello! What can I do for you?
+If you sold something here, you can view the sales if you want.
 If you want to receive the money for the sales just tell me.
-If you want to trade something for a different price i tell you
+If you want to trade something for a different price I tell you
 please 'rename' it to the price you want to sell if for. For example 
 'rename bolt to <12 platinum 10 silver>'. You will receive the
-money from me if someone bought that item. I take a fee of
-1% of the price for using my shop. If you don't want to
-sell the item anymore just take it out, it won't cost you anything.
+money from me if someone bought that item. I deduct a fee for using my shop
+of 1% of the price I offer you or you want to have for the item.
+
+If you don't want to sell the item anymore just take it out, it won't cost you
+anything except the fee you paid when putting it into my shop.
 Also note that the buyer can bargain the price, so you maybe get more
 or maybe even less than you wanted to have for the item. But don't
 be afraid, you will still get enough.
-
 endmsg
 x 10
 y 16