--- deliantra/maps/regions	2007/04/19 19:35:07	1.17
+++ deliantra/maps/regions	2007/04/19 22:43:39	1.26
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 is completely unknown, subject of some weird theories only, and nothing is
 known about its depth, the life it contains or the dangers it holds. No
 ship ventured far into it and came back. The only thing known about it is this:
-it is betetr to turn back. Now.
+it is better to turn back. Now.
 endmsg
 end
 
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
 longname near the south pole
 msg
 A cold place in the very south of the world. Strange monsters guard their
-territory. Many treasures are said to exist here.
+territory here but also many treasures are said to be found here.
 endmsg
 end
 
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@
 longname at the creation
 msg
 Who knows where this place is, but all have seen it. As mysterious as it is,
-its just an other part of life.
+its just another part of life.
 endmsg
 end
 
@@ -75,9 +75,10 @@
 now long since passed out of recorded history and into the stuff of legends.
 In the years since its construction it has gained the name "The yellow Brick
 Road" on account of the distinctive colour of its paving. Whilst in former
-times the Imperial highway was safe to all who woul dpass along it, in
+times the Imperial highway was safe to all who would pass along it, in
 recent times it has started to decay, as the toll of centuries comes to bear
-on this once-splendid testament to past powers.
+on this once-splendid testament to past powers. It is still the safest
+way to travel over land.
 endmsg
 end
 
@@ -118,7 +119,7 @@
 point between the other major cities along the route and an attractive
 location for trade and commerce. This combined with the sheltered harbour and
 extensive shipping lines, ensures that Scorn remains a key crossroads
-bustling with activity, long after its former military dominence has
+bustling with activity, long after its former military dominance has
 diminished.
 endmsg
 end
@@ -130,14 +131,14 @@
 randomitems region_scorn_kingdom
 msg
 Outside the gates of the city of scorn, the activity of the town can be heard,
-but not seen the cries of the traders, and calls of the sailors belie your
+but not seen. The cries of the traders, and calls of the sailors belie your
 proximity to this bustling town, though to look around you see only the relative
 tranquility of quiet farmland and the sense of peace it evokes.
 endmsg
 end
 
 treasureone region_generic_city
-   arch mouse
+   arch mouse_nongen
 end
 
 region scorn
@@ -174,9 +175,28 @@
 endmsg
 end
 
+treasureone region_navar_kingdom
+   arch ape
+      chance 100
+   more
+   arch sandy
+      chance 70
+   more
+   arch scorpion
+      chance 120
+   more
+   arch snake_nongen
+      chance 70
+   more
+   arch shadowpup
+      chance 7
+end
+
 region navar_kingdom
 parent world
 longname in the kingdom of Navar
+randomitems region_navar_kingdom
+chance 0.01
 jail_map /navar_city/jail/jail
 jail_x 16
 jail_y 1
@@ -234,7 +254,7 @@
 end
 
 treasureone region_brest
-   arch snake
+   arch snake_nongen
 end
 
 region brest
@@ -291,11 +311,11 @@
 randomitems region_darcap_county
 chance 0.01
 msg
-Isolated from the rest of the region by an extensive mountain range to the
-south, and possessing a massive natural harbour, Darcap is a small, but
-easily defensible town, dominated by a pair of powerful guilds. The town is
-also noted for its circus, whose reputation draws visitors from all over
-the world.
+Isolated from the rest of the region by the ocean and an extensive
+mountain range to the south, and possessing a massive natural harbour,
+Darcap is a small, but easily defensible town, dominated by a pair of
+powerful guilds. The town is also noted for its circus, whose reputation
+draws visitors from all over the world.
 endmsg
 end
 
@@ -305,7 +325,8 @@
 chance 0.002
 randomitems region_generic_city
 msg
-The center of the isolated continent: Darcap city, where brave adventurers live.
+The center of an isolated continent: Darcap city, where brave adventurers
+and mysterious practitioners of the arcane and dark arts live and perform.
 endmsg
 match ^/darcap/
 end
@@ -344,7 +365,7 @@
 randomitems region_wolfsburg_county
 chance 0.01
 msg
-Located on an island far away from the coast, wolfsburg relies entirely on its
+Located on an island far away from the coast, Wolfsburg relies entirely on its
 quay to supply the town and as a result has a strong seafaring tradition among
 its populence.
 endmsg
@@ -394,10 +415,10 @@
 parent world
 longname in Lake Country
 msg
-Lake Country originally was where the elves who where exiled from the north
-by the kings of Scorn, during the Vth millenia EK. They named the area
-Vkovzerov. The major elven city of Vkovzerov was Tashkeren-tah. It was
-destroyed by a Water arch-elemental in 4453EK.
+Lake Country originally was where the elves lived who where exiled
+from the north by the kings of Scorn, during the Vth millenia EK. They
+named the area Vkovzerov. The major elven city of Vkovzerov was
+Tashkeren-tah. It was destroyed by a Water arch-elemental in 4453EK.
 endmsg
 match ^/lake_country/
 end