--- deliantra/maps/regions	2007/04/19 22:38:47	1.25
+++ deliantra/maps/regions	2007/04/19 22:43:39	1.26
@@ -415,10 +415,10 @@
 parent world
 longname in Lake Country
 msg
-Lake Country originally was where the elves who where exiled from the north
-by the kings of Scorn, during the Vth millenia EK. They named the area
-Vkovzerov. The major elven city of Vkovzerov was Tashkeren-tah. It was
-destroyed by a Water arch-elemental in 4453EK.
+Lake Country originally was where the elves lived who where exiled
+from the north by the kings of Scorn, during the Vth millenia EK. They
+named the area Vkovzerov. The major elven city of Vkovzerov was
+Tashkeren-tah. It was destroyed by a Water arch-elemental in 4453EK.
 endmsg
 match ^/lake_country/
 end