--- deliantra/maps/regions	2007/04/22 00:21:45	1.29
+++ deliantra/maps/regions	2007/04/28 18:24:15	1.30
@@ -90,14 +90,15 @@
 
 region brest_highway
 parent world
-longname on the road connecting between Scorn, Brest and Lake Country
+longname on the road connecting Scorn, Brest and Lake Country
 chance 0.005
 randomitems region_security_zone
 msg
-Unlike most places in the world, the area stretching from Scorn down to
-Brest and Lake Country is patrolled regularly by kingdom soliders and
-should be relatively safe. Make sure you are not wandering too far into
-the wilderness, though, as only the roads are under watch.
+Unlike most places in the world, the area stretching from Scorn down
+to Brest and Lake Country is patrolled regularly by kingdom soliders
+and should be relatively safe. Make sure you are not wandering too far
+into the wilderness, though, as only the roads are under watch (and not
+everywhere - Lake Country is notoriously dangerous).
 endmsg
 end