--- deliantra/server/pod/books.pod	2007/03/07 19:01:54	1.15
+++ deliantra/server/pod/books.pod	2007/04/19 22:43:54	1.16
@@ -567,10 +567,10 @@
 
 =head1 History of Lake Country
 
-Lake Country originally was where the elves who where exiled from the north
-by the kings of Scorn, during the Vth millenia EK. They named the area
-Vkovzerov. The major elven city of Vkovzerov was Tashkeren-tah. It was
-destroyed by a Water arch-elemental in 4453EK.
+Lake Country originally was where the elves lived who where exiled
+from the north by the kings of Scorn, during the Vth millenia EK. They
+named the area Vkovzerov. The major elven city of Vkovzerov was
+Tashkeren-tah. It was destroyed by a Water arch-elemental in 4453EK.
 
 
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