--- deliantra/server/pod/books.pod	2009/03/30 12:41:27	1.24
+++ deliantra/server/pod/books.pod	2009/10/07 02:56:19	1.27
@@ -1237,21 +1237,32 @@
 fall of the Empire.
 
 
-=head1 The Bigworld
+=head1 The Big World
 
 The old world was small and it consisted of many pieces. Scorn, Navar,
 Brittany and Santo Dominion were in one large piece. Darcap and the
 Hill Village were in another smaller one. Lake Country was in yet
 another. Pupland was still another. The world was not whole, and the
 builders saw that this was wrong. They began the quest to unite the world
-and established the Bigworld. As the builders united the world they saw
+and established the Big World. As the builders united the world they saw
 that it was much too small and began to make it larger. They raised up the
-Great Mountains around Brest and they caused the Great Forest to grow. As
-the time passed, Navar grew to become a great Kingdom and the builders
+Great Mountains around Brest and they caused the Great Forest to grow.
+
+As the time passed, Navar grew to become a great Kingdom and the builders
 decided that it was a good city for players to call home and they gave the
-Heroes a choice to serve Scorn or Navar. Nevertheless, Pupland is still
-not part of this new world, but the builders wish to add it to the west of
-Scorn.
+Heroes a choice to serve Scorn or Navar. Nevertheless, Pupland was still
+not part of this new world.
+
+This was the state for a long time, until the builders decided that the
+Big World was not good, and set out to change it again. Everything
+changed. So much changed that, in fact, the world was completely
+unrecognisable to its denizens after the change.
+
+Except the area around Brest, at least according to the people living
+there. Or maybe they were just too busy fighting monsters to notice it.
+
+This time Pupland became part of the new Big World, and can be found in
+the very north, past Santo Dominion.
 
 
 =head1 Skud the Great
@@ -1978,7 +1989,7 @@
 traveling all over the world for many years.
 
 Since my copy of the book is now in a very bad condition, I decided to
-make a clean copy and publish it, so this knowledge doe snot get lost.
+make a clean copy and publish it, so this knowledge is not lost forever.
 
 B<- Samuel Midnight, Book Collector and Traveller, Scorn>
 
@@ -1992,6 +2003,7 @@
  著書     chosho     book
  貯蔵     chozou     storage
  付き     dzuki      to, under
+ ギリ神   girisin    Ruggili
  護衛     goei       guard
  本塁     honrui     stronghold
  一堂     ichidou    shrine
@@ -2026,3 +2038,4 @@
  要素     youso      element
  ザ       za         the
  座席     zaseki     seat
+