--- deliantra/server/pod/books.pod	2010/04/10 00:17:12	1.29
+++ deliantra/server/pod/books.pod	2010/04/10 02:40:26	1.32
@@ -2100,8 +2100,8 @@
 its energy improve the wearer's wisdom.
 
 The best known source for this mineral can be found in the Church of
-Gorokh in Scorn, in their so-called "Hell", which they apparently think to
-be a nice place to be in.
+Gorokh in Scorn, very deep down in their so-called "Hell", which they
+apparently think to be a nice place to be in.
 
 =head1 The Mineral Olivine
 
@@ -2118,7 +2118,7 @@
 its energy improve the wearer's charisma.
 
 The best known source for this mineral can be found in the Church of
-Valriel in Scorn, apparently in their so-called "Heaven".
+Valriel in Scorn, apparently very high up in their so-called "Heaven".
 
 =head1 The Mineral Phlogopite
 
@@ -2128,10 +2128,10 @@
 of course with a more rock-like texture).
 
 Since the mineral is so worthless but yet so common, miners often say "Oh
-Flog!" when they get Phlogopite instead something more wealthy. It was
-named after the minor goddess of Flog, one of the beings miners often pray
-to ensure (as they think) their survival. Apparently she does not care
-much about her name being used as an obvious invective...
+Flog!" when they get Phlogopite instead something more valuable. It was
+named after the minor goddess of Flog, one of the beings that miners often
+pray to, to ensure (as they think) their survival. Apparently she does not
+care much about her name being used as an obvious invective...
 
 The biggest value of Phlogopite lies in its beauty, in which it is
 considerably lacking, so it isn't worth all that much. At least it can be